John Corlis
1 min readMay 21, 2021


Mate, a great piece of writing. You are obviously well schooled in the historical record of monetary policy, and the skullduggery and shenanigans in the financial sector.

It’s fair to say also that I would agree wholeheartedly with what you’ve written here.

I hate to now introduce a critical note as it’s not my usual practice, but matey, your placement of commas nearly drove me nuts!

Please, your akward placement of said commas interrupted the flow of your writing many times over, and detracted from the otherwise good quality of your writing.

Just saying…this needs attention if you want to have the fluidity of good writing your work deserves.

I’m happy to cite the offending bits to you if you wanted, but you’d no doubt have resources you can tap more readily closer to hand.

Trust I’ve not offended you.

I only offer these comments as friendly feedback, which I’m sure most of us writing on Medium would appreciate.

Hope this helps, and not offends!





John Corlis

"Owl," said Rabbit shortly, "you and I have brains. The others have fluff. If there is any thinking to be done in this Forest--you and I must do it." A.A.Milne